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by 职业病, Tuesday, March 29, 2011, 12:00 @ KWCG-cleaning

We have been cleaning carpets in the Waterloo region for years.
我把这句放在后面了。

Areas we service are: Kitchener, Waterloo, Mississauga , Cambridge, Guelph, Stratford, Woodstock, Brantford and all surrounding areas.
改成：Areas that we serve are:.... 或者：Our service areas include: ....

We do carpet cleaning for both residential and commercial.
改成：We clean both residential and commercial carpets. 或者：We are specialized in both residential and commercial carpet cleanings.

We offer Carpet Cleaning, Upholstery Cleaning, Tile and Grout Cleaning, Mattress Cleaning, Carpet and Fabric Protection, and more.
offer 后面加冒号，内容没必要大写。

When it's time to hire a professional cleaning firm, look for some one you can trust to deliver outstanding results you will be pleased with long after the job is done.
改成：We have been cleaning carpets in the Waterloo Region for years. When it's time to hire a professional cleaning firm, look for someone (是一个词）you can trust. You will be pleased by our outstanding service and long lasting results. Satisfaction Garanteed!